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==Sheet Music==
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=Sheet Music=
SAATTBB arrangement by [[Mark Hamilton Dewey]]:
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*SSATBB Arrangement by [[Mark Hamilton Dewey]], 2007
* Copyright: [[Mark Hamilton Dewey]] - you may treat it as if it were [[public domain]].
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**[[media:BeThouMyVision Dewey.pdf|PDF]]
* Poetic Meter: [[:category:Irregular Meters|Irregular Meter]] ([[:category:5 5 6 4 5 5 6 5|5 5 6 4 5 5 6 5]]) (this differs from the normal arrangement)
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**[[media:BeThouMyVision Dewey piano.mid|MIDI]] (Piano)
* [[media:BeThouMyVision.pdf|PDF]]
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**[[media:BeThouMyVision Dewey choir.mid|MIDI]] (Choir)
* [[media:BeThouMyVision_choir.mid|MIDI (choir)]]
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**[[media:BeThouMyVision Dewey.ly|LilyPond]]
* [[media:BeThouMyVision_piano.mid|MIDI (piano)]]
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**Copyright: Released to the [[Public Domain]]
* [[media:BeThouMyVision.ly|LilyPond]]
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**Contributer: [[User:Veramet|Veramet]] 20:54, 27 July 2007 (MDT) (Veramet is the arranger)
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**Notes: The poetic meter varies slightly with this arrangement, and is somewhat different on the first two verses than the rest, due to where the emphasis on a certain line lies.  This is why this article is also in the irregular meters category.
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***'Light is short for Alight.
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***The midis have karaoke functionality, for all verses (only tested with [http://www.google.com/url?q=http://www.vanbasco.com/download.html&sa=X&oi=smap&resnum=1&ct=result&cd=1&usg=AFQjCNFwtt8t4LDr1eZ_4IQqWYWlTcr6Pw vanBasco's Karaoke Player]).
  
==Tunes and Composers==
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=Tunes=
'''Tune:''' [[Slane]] (Irish Folk Melody)
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*[[Slane]]
* Poetic Meter: [[:category:Irregular Meters|Irregular Meter]] ([[:category:5 5 6 4 5 5 5 5|5 5 6 4 5 5 5 5]])
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**Composer: [[Unknown Composer]]—[[Traditional|Irish Folk Melody]], 1909<ref>[http://www.archive.org/stream/oldirishfolkmusi00royauoft#page/150/mode/2up Old Irish Folk Music and Songs: a collection of 842 Irish airs and songs, hitherto unpublished, 1909 (no. 323; p. 151)]</ref>
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**The tune was first published in [http://www.archive.org/stream/oldirishfolkmusi00royauoft#page/150/mode/2up Old Irish Folk Music and Songs: a collection of 842 Irish airs and songs, hitherto unpublished, 1909 (no. 323; p. 151)] with the name 'With My Love on the Road' instead of Slane.
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**Copyright: The melody is [[public domain]]
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***Note: There was a public domain arrangement of 'Slane' published with 'Be Thou My Vision' in ''Irish Church Hymnal'', 1919<ref>[http://books.google.com/books?id=rQ_Y078X5NAC&pg=PA43#v=onepage&q&f=false 101 more hymn stories, 1985 (p. 43)]</ref>
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***Note: Another source says the version traditionally used with this hymn was first published in 1927 (probably [http://books.google.com/books?id=QDx9PQAACAAJ in this book]), and so a verification of the copyright and content on that is perhaps needed.<ref>[http://books.google.com/books?id=VKyewTv_V04C&pg=PA335#v=onepage&q&f=false The Harvard University Hymn Book, 1964 (p. 335)]</ref> Perhaps we have multiple traditions.
  
==Lyrics==
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=Lyrics=
'''Commonly Used Lyrics:'''
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*Poet: [[Unknown Poet]]—attributed to [[Dallan Forgaill]] (8th century)
* Poet: attributed to [[Dallan Forgaill]] (8th Century)
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*Copyright: [[public domain]] (note this refers to the original Irish text; see sub-headings for further copyright information)
* Copyright: [[Public Domain]]
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==Original Irish lyrics and English translation as found in [http://books.google.com/books?id=WHUlAAAAMAAJ&pg=PA89#v=onepage&q&f=false Ériu, Volumes 2-3, 1905 (p. 89–91)]==
* Poetic Meter: [[:category:Irregular Meters|Irregular Meter]] ([[:category:5 5 6 4 5 5 5 5|5 5 6 4 5 5 5 5]])
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*Translator: [[Mary Elizabeth Byrne]] (1880–1931), 1905
1. Be Thou my Vision, O Lord of my heart;<br>
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*Translation copyright: [[public domain]]
Naught be all else to me, save that Thou art.<br>
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<pre>Irish Gaelic text:
Thou my best Thought, by day or by night,<br>
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Waking or sleeping, Thy presence my light.
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1. Rob tu mo bhoile, a Comdi cride.
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Ní ní nech aile, acht ri secht nime.
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2. Rob tu mo scrutain i llo ’san-aidche.
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Rop tu atcheur im cotlad caidhce.
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3. Rob tu mo labhradh, rob tu mo tuicsi,
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Rob tusa damsa, rob misi duitsi.
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4. Rob tusa m’ athair, rob me do mac-sa.
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Rob tusa lemsa, rob misi latsa.
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5. Rob tu mo cathsciath, rob tu mo cloidem.
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Rob tusa m’ ordan, rob tusa m’ airer.
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6. Rob tu mo didiu rob tu mo daingen.
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Rob tu romtogba a n-aontaig aingel.
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7. Rob tu gach maithus dom curp, dom anmain.
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Rob tu mo flaithus a nim occus i talmain.
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8. Rob tusa t’ oinar sainṡerc mo cridhe.
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Ni rob nech aile, a airdrig nime.
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9. Co talla orm rondul it lama
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Mo cuid, mo cuisle ar med do grada.
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10. Rob tusa at’ aonar m'[ḟ]erann uais ammra
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Ni cuinngim doine na maine marba.
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11. Rob tusa dinsir cech selb, cech saoghal;
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Mar marb ar mbrenadh art fegad t’ aonar.
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12. Do serc am anmiun, do grad im craidhe
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Tabuir dam amlaidh, a ri secht nime.
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13. A ri secht nime, tabair dam amlaidh
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Do gradh im cride, do serc im anmain.
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14. Ac righ na n-uile ris iar mbuaid leire
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Robeo i flaith nime, a gile grene.
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15. Athair inmain, cluin, cluin mo nuallsa.
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Mithig monuarán lasin truagan truaghsa.
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16. A cride mo cridhe, cipead dommaire,
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A flaith na n-uile, rob tu mo boile.</pre>
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<pre>English translation (Mary E. Byrne):
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1. Be thou my vision, O Lord of my heart.
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None other is aught but the King of the seven heavens.
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2. Be thou my meditation by day and night;
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May it be thou that I behold ever in my sleep.
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3. Be thou my speech, be thou my understanding,
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Be thou with me, be I with thee.
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4. Be thou my father, be I thy son.
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Mayst thou be mine, may I be thine.
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5. Be thou my battle-shield, be thou my sword,
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Be thou my dignity, be thou my delight.
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6. Be thou my shelter, be thou my stronghold.
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Mayst thou raise me up to the company of the angels.
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7. Be thou every good to my body and soul.
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Be thou my kingdom in heaven and on earth.
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8. Be thou solely chief love of my heart.
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Let there be none other, O high King of Heaven.
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9. Till I am able to pass (?) into thy hands,
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My treasure, my beloved, through the greatness of thy love.
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10. Be thou alone my noble and wondrous estate.
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I seek not men, nor lifeless wealth.
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11. Be thou the constant guardian of every possession and every life (?).
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For our corrupt desires are dead at the mere sight of thee.
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12. Thy love in my soul and in my heart—
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Grant this to me, O King of the seven heavens.
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13. O King of the seven heavens grant me this—
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Thy love to be in my heart and in my soul.
  
2. Be Thou my Wisdom, and Thou my true Word;<br>
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14. With the King of all with (?) Him after victory won by piety
I ever with Thee and Thou with me, Lord;<br>
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May I be in the kingdom of heaven, O brightness of the sun.
Thou my great Father, I Thy true son;<br>
 
Thou in me dwelling, and I with Thee one.
 
  
3. Be Thou my battle Shield, Sword for the fight;<br>
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15. Beloved Father, hear, hear my lamentation;
Be Thou my Dignity, Thou my Delight;<br>
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Timely is the cry of woe of this miserable wretch.
Thou my soul’s Shelter, Thou my high Tower:<br>
 
Raise Thou me heavenward, O Power of my power.
 
  
4. Riches I heed not, nor man’s empty praise,<br>
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16. O heart of my heart, whate'er befall me,
Thou mine Inheritance, now and always:<br>
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O ruler of all, be thou my vision.</pre>
Thou and Thou only, first in my heart,<br>
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==Mary Byrne's translation versified by Eleanor Henrietta Hull, as found in [http://www.archive.org/stream/poembookofgaeltr00hulluoft#page/118/mode/2up The Poem-book of the Gael, 1912 (p. 119–120)]==
High King of Heaven, my Treasure Thou art.
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*Versifier: [[Eleanor Henrietta Hull]] (1860–1935), 1912
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*Versification copyright: [[public domain]]
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**Note: The popular version found today is different than this, but we have yet to find out who made the extra changes. We still need verification that the changes beyond what are found below are public domain, notwithstanding loads of publications have arisen with it, likely without knowing, and without permission from whomever made the changes.
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*[http://www.archive.org/stream/poembookofgael00hulliala#page/118/mode/2up See also the 1913 publication].
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<pre>1. Be Thou my Vision, O Lord of my heart,
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Naught is all else to me, save that Thou art.
  
5. High King of Heaven, my victory won,<br>
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2. Thou my best thought by day and by night,
May I reach Heaven’s joys, O bright Heaven’s Sun!<br>
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Waking or sleeping, Thy presence my light.
Heart of my own heart, whatever befall,<br>
 
Still be my Vision, O Ruler of all.
 
  
'''Original Irish Lyrics:'''
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3. Be Thou my Wisdom, Thou my true Word;
* Copyright: [[Public Domain]]
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I ever with Thee, Thou with me, Lord.
* Poetic Meter: ?
 
Rop tú mo baile
 
  
1. Rop tú mo baile,<br>
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4. Thou my great Father, I thy dear son;
a Choimdiu cride:<br>
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Thou in me dwelling, I with Thee one.
ní ní nech aile<br>
 
acht Rí secht nime.
 
  
2. Rop tú mo scrútain<br>
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5. Be Thou my battle-shield, sword for the fight,
i l-ló 's i n-aidche;<br>
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Be Thou my dignity, Thou my delight.
rop tú ad-chëar<br>
 
im chotlud caidche.
 
  
3. Rop tú mo labra,<br>
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6. Thou my soul's shelter, Thou my high tower;
rop tú mo thuicsiu;<br>
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Raise Thou me heavenward, Power of my power.
rop tussu dam-sa,<br>
 
rob misse duit-siu.
 
  
4. Rop tussu m'athair,<br>
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7. Riches I heed not or man's empty praise,
rob mé do mac-su;<br>
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Thou mine inheritance now and always.
rop tussu lem-sa,<br>
 
rob misse lat-su.
 
  
5. Rop tú mo chathscíath,<br>
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8. Thou, and Thou only, first in my heart,
rop tú mo chlaideb;<br>
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High King of Heaven, my treasure Thou art.
rop tussu m'ordan,<br>
 
rop tussu m'airer.
 
  
6. Rop tú mo dítiu,<br>
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9. King of the seven heavens, grant me for dole,
rop tú mo daingen;<br>
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Thy love in my heart, Thy light in my soul.
rop tú nom-thocba<br>
 
i n-áentaid n-aingel.
 
  
7. Rop tú cech maithius<br>
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10. Thy light from my soul, Thy love from my heart,
dom churp, dom anmain;<br>
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King of the seven heavens, may they never depart.
rop tú mo flaithius<br>
 
i n-nim 's i talmain.
 
  
8. Rop tussu t' áenur<br>
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11. With the High King of heaven, after victory won,
sainserc mo chride;<br>
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May I reach heaven's joys, O Bright heaven's Son!
ní rop nech aile<br>
 
acht Airdrí nime.
 
  
9. Co talla forum,<br>
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12. Heart of my own heart, whatever befall,
ré n-dul it láma,<br>
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Still be my Vision, O Ruler of all.</pre>
mo chuit, mo chotlud,<br>
 
ar méit do gráda.
 
  
10. Rop tussu t' áenur<br>
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==Lyrics from [[Mark Hamilton Dewey|Mark Hamilton Dewey's]] SSATBB arrangement==
m' urrann úais amra:<br>
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*Note: The arranger isn't satisfied with this arrangement—so, now that he has found a translation of all sixteen Irish verses, he plans to make a new version.
ní chuinngim daíne<br>
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*Contributer: The arranger
ná maíne marba.
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*Copyright: Public Domain - All portions that were not already public domain were released to the public domain by the arranger on 27 July 2007. He already had released the versification (except for a few changes in the third verse, which he released to the public domain in 2007) to the public domain in 2006.
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*Poetic Meter: [[P.M.|Irregular]], but it may work as [[:category:5 5 6 4 5 5 6 5|5 5 6 4 5 5 6 5]] and/or [[:category:5 5 5 5 5 5 6 5|5 5 5 5 5 5 6 5]].
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*Arranger's Notes: The first two verses differ significantly from the original, and the other verses contain some less major alterations, mostly for versification and to conform with the mood established by the changes in the first two verses.  The second verse was changed for several reasons: 1. To accommodate female singers (i.e. it once said ''and I Thy true son'', with ''son'' referring to the singer. 2. The altered note on the last system made it difficult to simply reversify that verse.  The first verse was altered to avoid a certain double meaning to those who would think of the song less poetically.  The first line of the first verse was changed for the sake of mood, as it contrasted strangely with the previous verses, before the change, although I did like ''for the fight'' more than ''in the fight'' and ''in the fight'' is quickly growing on me with the new mood, but ''for'' just didn't fit as well.  The change to ''Guardian'' I much preferred, as it avoided the whole conflict of what kind of armor name I should use (plus it made the song seem less war-like, though it fit well being thus in the original version). [[User:Veramet|Veramet]] 16:39, 28 July 2007 (MDT)
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*Contributer: [[User:Veramet|Veramet]] 21:39, 27 July 2007 (MDT)
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1. Be Thou my Vision,<br>
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Through night and come day;<br>
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'Light* on me always,<br>
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Thy Spirit to stay—<br>
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Thou, Eternal Father,<br>
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The Great and the Last,<br>
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The wise and true Sov'reign<br>
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Of all that shall pass.<br>
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(*Note that <i>'Light</i> stands for ''Alight'')
  
11. Rop amlaid dínsiur<br>
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2. Be Thou my Wisdom,<br>
cech sel, cech sáegul,<br>
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My Staff and my Stay,<br>
mar marb oc brénad,<br>
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Shine through the darkness;<br>
ar t' fégad t' áenur.
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Give light to my way!<br>
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Be Thou the true Source<br>
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Of all I enjoy,<br>
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So let carnal pleasures<br>
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No longer annoy.
  
12. Do serc im anmain,<br>
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3. Be Thou my Guardian,<br>
do grád im chride,<br>
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My Sword in the fight;<br>
tabair dam amlaid,<br>
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Be Thou my Dignity,<br>
a Rí secht nime.
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Thou my Delight;<br>
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Thou my soul's Shelter,<br>
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And Thou my high Tow'r:<br>
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Wilt Thou raise me heavenward,<br>
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O Pow'r of my pow'r?
  
13. Tabair dam amlaid,<br>
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4. Riches I heed not,<br>
a Rí secht nime,<br>
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Or man's empty praise,<br>
do serc im anmain,<br>
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Thou mine Inheritance,<br>
do grád im chride.
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Now and always:<br>
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Thou and Thou only,<br>
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Still first in my heart,<br>
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The High King of Heaven,<br>
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My Treasure Thou art.
  
14. Go Ríg na n-uile<br>
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5. High King of Heaven,<br>
rís íar m-búaid léire;<br>
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My victory won,<br>
ro béo i flaith nime<br>
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May I reach Heaven's joys,<br>
i n-gile gréine
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O bright Heav'n's Sun!<br>
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Heart of my own heart,<br>
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Whatever befall,<br>
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Still be Thou my Vision,<br>
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O Ruler of all!
  
15. A Athair inmain,<br>
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==External Lyrics==
cluinte mo núall-sa:<br>
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===Lyrics from ucc.ie (Original Irish Lyrics)===
mithig (mo-núarán!)<br>
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* Copyright: [[Public Domain]]
lasin trúagán trúag-sa.
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* Poetic Meter: ?
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* [http://www.ucc.ie/celt/published/G400018/text001.html Lyrics from ucc.ie]
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====Stanzas====
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The Irish text at ucc.ie is in 16 stanzas. Most current American English hymnals that contain this hymn give four stanzas, the text as at oremus.org but omitting the third (breastplate) stanza. The [[Summit Choirbook]] gives an additional stanza.
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===Lyrics from [http://www.hymntime.com/tch The Cyber Hymnal&trade;]===
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* Poet: attributed to [[Dallan Forgaill]] (8th Century)
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* Copyright: [[Public Domain]]
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* Poetic Meter: [[:category:5 5 6 4 5 5 5 5|5 5 6 4 5 5 5 5]]
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* [http://www.hymntime.com/tch/htm/b/t/btmvison.htm Lyrics link from the Cyber Hymnal&trade;]
  
16. A Chríst mo chride,<br>
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=References=
cip ed dom-aire,<br>
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<references/>
a Flaith na n-uile,<br>
 
rop tú mo baile.
 
  
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=External Links=
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*[http://www.ucc.ie/celt/published/G400018/text001.html Original Irish Lyrics]
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*[http://www.oremus.org/hymnal/b/b021.html Lyrics from Oremus Hymnal]
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*[http://www.cyberhymnal.org/htm/b/t/btmvison.htm Lyrics from The Cyber Hymnal]
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*[http://www.cpdl.org/wiki/index.php/Be_Thou_My_Vision_%28Traditional%29 CPDL Article]
  
 
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Latest revision as of 23:37, 8 May 2024

Sheet Music

  • SSATBB Arrangement by Mark Hamilton Dewey, 2007
    • PDF
    • MIDI (Piano)
    • MIDI (Choir)
    • LilyPond
    • Copyright: Released to the Public Domain
    • Contributer: Veramet 20:54, 27 July 2007 (MDT) (Veramet is the arranger)
    • Notes: The poetic meter varies slightly with this arrangement, and is somewhat different on the first two verses than the rest, due to where the emphasis on a certain line lies. This is why this article is also in the irregular meters category.
      • 'Light is short for Alight.
      • The midis have karaoke functionality, for all verses (only tested with vanBasco's Karaoke Player).

Tunes

Lyrics

Original Irish lyrics and English translation as found in Ériu, Volumes 2-3, 1905 (p. 89–91)

Irish Gaelic text:

1. Rob tu mo bhoile, a Comdi cride.
Ní ní nech aile, acht ri secht nime.

2. Rob tu mo scrutain i llo ’san-aidche.
Rop tu atcheur im cotlad caidhce.

3. Rob tu mo labhradh, rob tu mo tuicsi,
Rob tusa damsa, rob misi duitsi.

4. Rob tusa m’ athair, rob me do mac-sa.
Rob tusa lemsa, rob misi latsa.

5. Rob tu mo cathsciath, rob tu mo cloidem.
Rob tusa m’ ordan, rob tusa m’ airer.

6. Rob tu mo didiu rob tu mo daingen.
Rob tu romtogba a n-aontaig aingel.

7. Rob tu gach maithus dom curp, dom anmain.
Rob tu mo flaithus a nim occus i talmain.

8. Rob tusa t’ oinar sainṡerc mo cridhe.
Ni rob nech aile, a airdrig nime.

9. Co talla orm rondul it lama
Mo cuid, mo cuisle ar med do grada.

10. Rob tusa at’ aonar m'[ḟ]erann uais ammra
Ni cuinngim doine na maine marba.

11. Rob tusa dinsir cech selb, cech saoghal;
Mar marb ar mbrenadh art fegad t’ aonar.

12. Do serc am anmiun, do grad im craidhe
Tabuir dam amlaidh, a ri secht nime.

13. A ri secht nime, tabair dam amlaidh
Do gradh im cride, do serc im anmain.

14. Ac righ na n-uile ris iar mbuaid leire
Robeo i flaith nime, a gile grene.

15. Athair inmain, cluin, cluin mo nuallsa.
Mithig monuarán lasin truagan truaghsa.

16. A cride mo cridhe, cipead dommaire,
A flaith na n-uile, rob tu mo boile.
English translation (Mary E. Byrne):

1. Be thou my vision, O Lord of my heart.
None other is aught but the King of the seven heavens.

2. Be thou my meditation by day and night;
May it be thou that I behold ever in my sleep.

3. Be thou my speech, be thou my understanding,
Be thou with me, be I with thee.

4. Be thou my father, be I thy son.
Mayst thou be mine, may I be thine.

5. Be thou my battle-shield, be thou my sword,
Be thou my dignity, be thou my delight.

6. Be thou my shelter, be thou my stronghold.
Mayst thou raise me up to the company of the angels.

7. Be thou every good to my body and soul.
Be thou my kingdom in heaven and on earth.

8. Be thou solely chief love of my heart.
Let there be none other, O high King of Heaven.

9. Till I am able to pass (?) into thy hands,
My treasure, my beloved, through the greatness of thy love.

10. Be thou alone my noble and wondrous estate.
I seek not men, nor lifeless wealth.

11. Be thou the constant guardian of every possession and every life (?).
For our corrupt desires are dead at the mere sight of thee.

12. Thy love in my soul and in my heart—
Grant this to me, O King of the seven heavens.

13. O King of the seven heavens grant me this—
Thy love to be in my heart and in my soul.

14. With the King of all with (?) Him after victory won by piety
May I be in the kingdom of heaven, O brightness of the sun.

15. Beloved Father, hear, hear my lamentation;
Timely is the cry of woe of this miserable wretch.

16. O heart of my heart, whate'er befall me,
O ruler of all, be thou my vision.

Mary Byrne's translation versified by Eleanor Henrietta Hull, as found in The Poem-book of the Gael, 1912 (p. 119–120)

  • Versifier: Eleanor Henrietta Hull (1860–1935), 1912
  • Versification copyright: public domain
    • Note: The popular version found today is different than this, but we have yet to find out who made the extra changes. We still need verification that the changes beyond what are found below are public domain, notwithstanding loads of publications have arisen with it, likely without knowing, and without permission from whomever made the changes.
  • See also the 1913 publication.
1. Be Thou my Vision, O Lord of my heart,
Naught is all else to me, save that Thou art.

2. Thou my best thought by day and by night,
Waking or sleeping, Thy presence my light.

3. Be Thou my Wisdom, Thou my true Word;
I ever with Thee, Thou with me, Lord.

4. Thou my great Father, I thy dear son;
Thou in me dwelling, I with Thee one.

5. Be Thou my battle-shield, sword for the fight,
Be Thou my dignity, Thou my delight.

6. Thou my soul's shelter, Thou my high tower;
Raise Thou me heavenward, Power of my power.

7. Riches I heed not or man's empty praise,
Thou mine inheritance now and always.

8. Thou, and Thou only, first in my heart,
High King of Heaven, my treasure Thou art.

9. King of the seven heavens, grant me for dole,
Thy love in my heart, Thy light in my soul.

10. Thy light from my soul, Thy love from my heart,
King of the seven heavens, may they never depart.

11. With the High King of heaven, after victory won,
May I reach heaven's joys, O Bright heaven's Son!

12. Heart of my own heart, whatever befall,
Still be my Vision, O Ruler of all.

Lyrics from Mark Hamilton Dewey's SSATBB arrangement

  • Note: The arranger isn't satisfied with this arrangement—so, now that he has found a translation of all sixteen Irish verses, he plans to make a new version.
  • Contributer: The arranger
  • Copyright: Public Domain - All portions that were not already public domain were released to the public domain by the arranger on 27 July 2007. He already had released the versification (except for a few changes in the third verse, which he released to the public domain in 2007) to the public domain in 2006.
  • Poetic Meter: Irregular, but it may work as 5 5 6 4 5 5 6 5 and/or 5 5 5 5 5 5 6 5.
  • Arranger's Notes: The first two verses differ significantly from the original, and the other verses contain some less major alterations, mostly for versification and to conform with the mood established by the changes in the first two verses. The second verse was changed for several reasons: 1. To accommodate female singers (i.e. it once said and I Thy true son, with son referring to the singer. 2. The altered note on the last system made it difficult to simply reversify that verse. The first verse was altered to avoid a certain double meaning to those who would think of the song less poetically. The first line of the first verse was changed for the sake of mood, as it contrasted strangely with the previous verses, before the change, although I did like for the fight more than in the fight and in the fight is quickly growing on me with the new mood, but for just didn't fit as well. The change to Guardian I much preferred, as it avoided the whole conflict of what kind of armor name I should use (plus it made the song seem less war-like, though it fit well being thus in the original version). Veramet 16:39, 28 July 2007 (MDT)
  • Contributer: Veramet 21:39, 27 July 2007 (MDT)

1. Be Thou my Vision,
Through night and come day;
'Light* on me always,
Thy Spirit to stay—
Thou, Eternal Father,
The Great and the Last,
The wise and true Sov'reign
Of all that shall pass.
(*Note that 'Light stands for Alight)

2. Be Thou my Wisdom,
My Staff and my Stay,
Shine through the darkness;
Give light to my way!
Be Thou the true Source
Of all I enjoy,
So let carnal pleasures
No longer annoy.

3. Be Thou my Guardian,
My Sword in the fight;
Be Thou my Dignity,
Thou my Delight;
Thou my soul's Shelter,
And Thou my high Tow'r:
Wilt Thou raise me heavenward,
O Pow'r of my pow'r?

4. Riches I heed not,
Or man's empty praise,
Thou mine Inheritance,
Now and always:
Thou and Thou only,
Still first in my heart,
The High King of Heaven,
My Treasure Thou art.

5. High King of Heaven,
My victory won,
May I reach Heaven's joys,
O bright Heav'n's Sun!
Heart of my own heart,
Whatever befall,
Still be Thou my Vision,
O Ruler of all!

External Lyrics

Lyrics from ucc.ie (Original Irish Lyrics)

Stanzas

The Irish text at ucc.ie is in 16 stanzas. Most current American English hymnals that contain this hymn give four stanzas, the text as at oremus.org but omitting the third (breastplate) stanza. The Summit Choirbook gives an additional stanza.

Lyrics from The Cyber Hymnal™

References

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